Tuesday, November 3, 2020

Down The Lane Of Memory -01 Comments

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Do you recall my dear
Those paints of wet lips
On those cheeks of teen years
embracing the heat of our hearts
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Rajnish Manga 03 November 2020

The story begins with joys and pleasures of being together in blissful moments but ends in a heart-break. Very sad and poignant mishap where the reader finds himself as an eye-witness to provide circumstantial evidence. Thanks, Dear Friend.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 November 2020

Thanks dear poet for so lovely, deep and true introspection, its so inspiring, a pure painful memory sticks longer than the sweet pleasant ones. In later years the pain persists while the pleasure fades gradually.

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Varsha M 03 November 2020

Good memories down the lane. Beautifully written. Thank-you.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 November 2020

Thanks dear poetess, its so inspiring to have a lovely compliment from you.

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