Thursday, March 7, 2013

Down The Drain Comments

Rating: ★4.8

The factory loomed
at the top of the hill.
A pub sign reflected
in yesterdays puddle
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concrete rains
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Kevin Halls 10 March 2013

Love this Sally and I echo the other comments as it is so powerful in words and meaning. I can picture this as I used to drink in a pub like the one mentioned! Brilliant.

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Sally P. P. 03 May 2020

I used to play darts and was familiar with those places. X

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Dave Walker 08 March 2013

A fantastic poem, great wording.

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Sally P P. 03 May 2020

Thanks for your sweet comment, Dave.

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2013

Very descriptive Sally - well penned.

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Sally P. P. 03 May 2020

Glad you read it, Val. Thanks.

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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Haverhill Suffolk England
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