Sunday, May 20, 2012

Down In The Trenches Comments

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Down in the trenches it's an awful place to be
You never quite know, what your gunna see
Down in the trenches with the tommy boys
With the deafening silence that makes no noise
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Beth White
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Saleem Tharani 18 August 2012

Awesome! A real reverence to the saviors of the nations and to all those who venture their life for mankind.Pain glowing from the sockets, mustard gas poor mites -- Conrads by my side I shall die with pride. remarkable spirit! Well written, gentle but thrilling flow. Keep up Dear!

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Heather Wilson 20 May 2012

That is such wonderful work for a 13 year old, to even think out the content as well as write it.

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