Down In Alloway / 20/04/2008 Author's Pick Comments

Beautifully composed in poeticc prose my friend evoked some cherished memories from my younger days

Mark, this is lovely - incredibly atmospheric - you blend both mindscape and landsacpe to create a real sense of place and mood. You take the reader with you as you eyes scan the horizon and reflect upon the 'shadows of friends' you once knew, a place that obviously holds a lot of memories. Will return to read the short story too.. justine.