Down By The Sea Comments

ok, i had MORE than 2 suggestions! ! ! ! bri ;)

two little suggestions i've incorporated into your last stanza: " There are wafting gentle winds whose kiss... Anoint our bodies with cooling bliss, As through the hours of burning sun, We try to get our tans well done. They, nowhere else could better be... Than on the shore, down by the sea." to MyPoemList bri :)

You've conjured up so many happy memories here Ernestine. Just beautiful. Andrew x

impeccable form and flow...a soothing read makes me want to grab my chair and umbrella and head to the surf. great read. -Tailor

Down by the sea...is my favorite place to be. Look, your rhymes are contagious, though much better than mine! Thanks for taking me to my happy place, Ernestine.

Then wafting gentle winds whose kiss, Anoint our bodies with cooling bliss, What a wonderful poem Ernestine, Beautiful, just beautiful Love Duncan X