Down But Not Defeated Comments

Re: Broken but not defeated (Score: 1) by Zbird on Wednesday, April 04,2012 (08: 04: 54) lovely lovely poem and isn't that all we can all strive for in our lives. to try to find our own happiness and be the best we can be in spite of all the odds against us.

Sandra Martyres A heartfelt piece on the reality of life. But as Cynthia says the sun does shine too!

Cyn BuhainBaello Your poem conveys the realities of life and although the trials and suffering come, it does not rain everyday.

Broken but not defeated I am broken at heart I don’t feel it as part Life did not have good start Yet I live and try to look smart