Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Down Behind The Dustbin - A Boy's Poem (Written When I Was 11) Comments

Rating: 3.3

Down behind the dustbin,
I met a dog called Lizzie.
I asked what she was doing,
'**** off, I'm far too busy.'
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Jack Williams
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Sonya Florentino 07 November 2009

eleven and already being clever!

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Ruth Walters 03 November 2009

great little rhyme and flow....loved it! Ruthie

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 27 October 2009

Your brilliance was announced when and before' this composition. Congratulations. You are gifted.

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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

I really enjoyed this. Glad you saved it. A dog actually ate most of my childhood poems, just before he got himself run over. (smile)

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Jack Miller 22 October 2009

Here's the title of yours I liked best. What a promising poem for someone 11. Thanks for your comment. I just now joined this site. Your other poems are stirring. My fave poets are W S Merwin, Yeats, Keats (of course) , and Frank O'Hara to give you 4. Nice bio too- I need to work on that.

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Scuba Steve 26 August 2009

This is some good stuff. I liked it. Thanks for posting

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