Down behind the dustbin,
I met a dog called Lizzie.
I asked what she was doing,
'**** off, I'm far too busy.'
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Your brilliance was announced when and before' this composition. Congratulations. You are gifted.
I really enjoyed this. Glad you saved it. A dog actually ate most of my childhood poems, just before he got himself run over. (smile)
Here's the title of yours I liked best. What a promising poem for someone 11. Thanks for your comment. I just now joined this site. Your other poems are stirring. My fave poets are W S Merwin, Yeats, Keats (of course) , and Frank O'Hara to give you 4. Nice bio too- I need to work on that.
eleven and already being clever!