Friday, June 17, 2016

Doves & Love (Sijo) Comments

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Rajnish Manga 28 September 2016

Lovely poetic description of a pair of birds doing their respective duties from making of a nest to that of hatching an egg. Can teach a thing or two to all human beings. Sijo is welcome and enjoyable.

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Spock The Vegan 28 September 2016

Thank you. Yes, some human haven't got a clue.

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 June 2016

I was not familiar with this type of poetry, so I did some research, and found that it is a Korean poetic form. And accordingly, there is that twist in the middle of the last line, that defines its form. Thank you for making me aware of its existence.

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Spock The Vegan 28 September 2016

My pleasure. I have thought to try all forms, but more keep showing up.

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Kim Barney 20 June 2016

Yes, that nest looks like it could certainly use a few more twigs! I never heard of a sijo either. Will have to look it up.

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Wes Vogler 19 June 2016

Oh hmmmm now I have to go look up a sijo to see if you are doing it right.

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Kelly Kurt 17 June 2016

Thank goodness for the inspiration of nature

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