Monday, January 20, 2014

Dove Comments

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What happened to you my love?
It seems like your heart was broken by someone whom you loved
I want you to feel at ease
So please, let me heal the aching breeze
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Rhona Daileg
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Mac Adrone Adonay 11 February 2014

I guess there is a typo in the last line. You truly expressed yourself in this poem and I like the way you define love through a dove. Nice symbolism :)

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Rhona Daileg 27 March 2016

thank you so much! :)

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