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Sunday, July 1, 2012

Doubts Are Mirages, Sometimes.. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The success not many miles away,
Doubts confuse the minds sway,
The life is full of adventures,
Sorrows and tears are mirages,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

success weakness

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Rajendran Muthiah 01 July 2012

Wonderful! Rated *****. But I think, elision(removal of words, letters) is not necessary in some lines. They may be'The success is', to sway', 'tactics'. The punctuation mark 'comma' is used in places where 'the full stop' may be used. Thanks.

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