Doubts Comments

wow! Such a nice poem, Mallika. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

Hi Mallika, A wonderful poem on the intrigues of life. Anantham Ajnatham AvarNaneeyam Ee lOka golam thiriyunna margam. Athingal engadoritathirunnu Nokkunna marthyan kadhayenthu kantoo! And when we allow 'failures to invade us we are submitting to the unknown! Which we should not. these endless chain of doubts That seemed as puzzles or riddles Not a single one from them Can be analyzed.. (I think the word can't needs to be corrected as can.) Rishis of yore spent the entire life seeking answers to these very questions. The way they intrigue us to day, they intrigued those sages all over the world, thousands of years back. No answer yet! ! ! ! ! Beautiful.10 these endless chain of doubts That seemed as puzzles or riddles Not a single one from them Can't be analyzed

Doubts pester us at each step of life. You have described the problem very well in this poem with appropriate imagery. You have chosen life's situations well as examples to drive home your point. Good poetry. It was racy reading. Thanks for inviting me to read your poem. (10)

Doubts make our actions and words indecisive, if we doubt ourselves it is a lack of confidence that plunders and robs our joy. You have vividly portrayed in beautiful imagery the need for release of disabling thoughts and feelings. To allow ourselves to experience freedom like the ocean embracing the shore it's waves dancing in joy at the depth of release of all worries and to write freedom on the soft sand. The wind our ally opening our minds to life like the wide expanse of sea and sky. Stunning write!

Nice poem...good wordings...10 Give access No one can predict And instruct Full success Sometimes it may have draw back despite bad chase So love it fully And skillfully With all the joy for self family With the blessings from an almighty

Day and night with sun and moon They are in motion without commotion. I am sorry to have missed your poetry, Mallika ji. This is the first of your poems that I have read and it goes into the list of my favourite poems. It has a substantial philosophical content, analyses of human behaviour and its analogy with nature around us. Thought provoking. Thanks. I too wish to glide in breeze to liberate myself from all bonds where ups and downs are inevitable.

hundreds of kites gilds away still we laugh when thry tug together