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Hi Tiffany. You right beautifully and your serious vocabulary creates a semi-surreal and dense meaning. Lovely poem and thank you for it. I love Massachusetts. I was there some years ago, studying Engineering. You may read my poems and comment on a few, maybe. I added you to my list of friends. G.

Even in the time of weakness there is strength found. Whether it be in the loss of a loved one, a lover even the loss of self. Having someone to lean on and a shoulder to cry on is important. Loved this one very much. I have a poem titled Tear Drops, stop by and take a look.

the simple tip about writing poem is to write ur thoughts on a paper and then just give it a rhymyl look but sometimes poems r written in such an amazing way that they really don't need to be rhythmic. Nice poems.. share more.............

I can follow your line of thinking. But I am not helped with so many rather hard words. Could you possibly be a little more simple? No hurt intended. But I like the poem. Mohabeer Beeharry I am sorry