Friday, September 16, 2011

Doubt Comments

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I fear I am in the wrong,
Shying away from your
Blossoming Judas lips,
And the scent of vague
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Stefanie Fontker
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 17 September 2011

Very, very nice expression of feelings in this short verse...Actually, I'd say, 'Divine! '... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Unwritten Soul 17 September 2011

So hard to do when the doubt coming to you...Well doubt is confusion..And 'Judas' had proven that the lies can beautifully conceal the truth...Hope we find the only truth not a lies..Nice words Stefanie, you have so much talents...Burst it out! _Unwritten Soul

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