Monday, November 23, 2009

Doubt Comments

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I have days when i doubt your feelings for me.
Wonder, do you love me like I love you?
How could anyone really love that much.
Then you kiss me on the forehead.
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Roxy Gonro
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Gillena Cox 30 November 2009

enjoyed the way you expressed the quandry and the resolve; keep on writing

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Dev Poet 23 November 2009

I like your poem. That is the best thing about poetry. words. There is no right or wrong way to express your feeling

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Michael Gale 23 November 2009

Great poem. I might however start the stanza, ' I'd wonder, instead of begin it with 'Wonder.' God bless us all-MJG.

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