Monday, January 15, 2018

Doubt Comments

Rating: 5.0

In his head spun a mountain of doubt.
He couldn't see how she could just walk out.
Was he that blind?
To not see the breakdown of their love relationship coming all the time.
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Lamar Cole
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Rini Shibu 16 January 2018

Misunderstanding and skeptical attitude leads to breakups. Well penned lam

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2018

A poignant write about love. Probably he took love for granted. Well executed piece with great rhyme.10

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