Monday, July 23, 2007

Double Lounger Comments

Rating: 5.0

A soft double lounger closely sitting next to the fire
Distance enough just for warmth.
Small diamonds suspended in the sky
Crescent moon sliding slowly
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Patricia Gale
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Original Unknown Girl 17 March 2008

Sigh... this is so tenderly written. The descriptives are sublime to say the least 'small diamonds in the sky' - what a gorgeous way to mirror the stars. I loved this piece Patricia, so evocative and eloquent. HG: -) xx

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Francesca Johnson 23 July 2007

Autumn's early call, the red embers of the fire, the lounger holding only one, and the sighs of a love long gone........tragically mellow and infinitely sad. And yet, there is so much beauty and serenity in this piece. Magical writing, Patricia. Love, Fran xxx

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