Monday, February 7, 2022

Double Intrusion Comments

Rating: 4.7

A grain of sand gets stuck in me,
Causing me irritation - damn!
And so does respond my body
To give some relief to this clam.
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Ima Ryma
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2022

As the time has gone by enough, I feel much better after all....to this I would juxtapose the penultimate line without any space!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2022

A wonderful well crafted poem. Congratulations! !

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 February 2022

Imaginative! Congratulations!

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Nabakishore Dash 17 February 2022

Very nicely written revered poet.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 February 2022

only human is wonderful creation!

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