Double Entendre Lover Comments

Fantastic. Very clever write. Your use of opposites worked very well.

O that truly reflects how love is..

Wow that's actually really good! Sublime! I loved it! You were completely right. It describes how you felt about her yet felt pain how there is that line between the pleasure and pain as previously mentioned by Almeida, N. Well written. Williams, T.

this ones a real winner for me..it describes so well the thin line between pleasure & pain..