Double-Edged Sword Comments

I think this is lovely for 3 reasons : D 1) this is a topic i have failed to write a good poem on. you have and i respect that... a lot. 2) not only so but its so coherent and well explored! 3) you use the words that sound nice and sometimes out of the ordinary. its double edged but its shiny! : D

This piece is truly beautiful! You are an amazing writer, i especially liked the lines: You are my comfort, yet you are killing me & That face is burned into my dreams, haunting me every night. Keep writing and dont ever stop.

This is the poem where I first fell in love with your poetry. I love how haunting it is and the ending stays with you. Legendary.

This is a chilling and beautiful piece of work. Captivating from the first line. Excellent metaphors and appealing honesty. I especially liked: You're like an ethereal black hole, always drawing me closer to you. I try to let you go, but I'm trapped in your Event Horizon. In a way, I don't mind... and I am benighted when your radiance is nowhere to be found. I suppose it's for the best though...