As you laid your head on your sweater in the back seat
I wasn't aware that you was in pain
because my mind and eyes were so weak
I made your world rain
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A Beautiful written poem. Doubled edged memories-pain and joy in juxtaposition. This poem dug deep into my soul-very emotional! A10
Another amazing poem. Wow. You were a poet even before you knew it. Double edged memories indeed that transport you back to those times of joy, but then knowing that those times are no more, you sit saddened regretting the things that have ended. Memories are all that remain, and these can seem to haunt and torture you in those dark times in life. For these memories are both a blessing and a curse. Keep up the good work Nathan. You are well on your way. :)
this is an amazingly beautiful poem... how could you forget that you wrote it? its like an injection of pain...loved it 10+++