Monday, October 12, 2009

Double Edged Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you laid your head on your sweater in the back seat
I wasn't aware that you was in pain
because my mind and eyes were so weak
I made your world rain
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Nathan Barkley
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Saane Pahulu 15 October 2009

this is an amazingly beautiful poem... how could you forget that you wrote it? its like an injection of pain...loved it 10+++

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

A Beautiful written poem. Doubled edged memories-pain and joy in juxtaposition. This poem dug deep into my soul-very emotional! A10

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Gold Fish 13 October 2009

Another amazing poem. Wow. You were a poet even before you knew it. Double edged memories indeed that transport you back to those times of joy, but then knowing that those times are no more, you sit saddened regretting the things that have ended. Memories are all that remain, and these can seem to haunt and torture you in those dark times in life. For these memories are both a blessing and a curse. Keep up the good work Nathan. You are well on your way. :)

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