Thursday, July 20, 2006

Double-Edged Blade Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love tender, yet forbidden,
Gentle desire, growing in your eyes
Alight with stormy passion
Aglow like starry skies.
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Ruby Root 20 July 2006

Excellent Poem Lesa, You have a way with expressing yourself. It makes the reader want to comment. Great emotions, I just don't think I have ever been in love or maybe I went through to much to feel like I have been in love. I think when you get hurt after awhile nothing matters. Anyways great poem.

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Sophia White 20 July 2006

It's sad how anger can tear people apart. Lovely poem, Lesa

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