Thursday, October 8, 2015

Double Chocolate Comments

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I'm - bilingual double
as double chocolate.
Hell was at first inside me.
beated me like the rain.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 09 October 2015

We call the ice cream treat you mention a sundae and it makes an unusual image of the soul but if the Psalmist can compare the soul to fruits and wine, we can use deserts. There is an overall sweetness in this poem. It's just the opposite of a dostoyevskian poem like my DIMITRI'S SOUL. You show JOY can also be a path to soul fulfillment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 October 2015

Nice piece of work! Yes, we should turn to Sodom.

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