Dormouse.....Adult Nature Comments

You really excelled here, loved it :)

Some excellent language and great imagination with created words and sounds and experiences that a rabbit hole could only dream of. Check the hot water heater, there's steam coming out of that hole.

I will never be able to read Alice, without laughing, ever again. :)))

A great poem, naughty can be nice.

moons wholesome devour, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.