Thursday, August 11, 2016

Dormitory Comments

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The new school room
Was a dormitory
At loggerheads colomendy
Everyone was friendly
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Tom Allport
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Bri Edwards 28 August 2019

" loggerheads colomendy" ? ? ? ? were you 'clots'? ? , sea turtles, shrikes, or PIGEONS? ? I hope 'crying out' was all the man did in the dark! ! i like the poem, but you made me do some research. ha ha. i'd actually heard of the turtles and shrikes, but i thought you must mean somethin' else. bri :) p.s. WOE: " noun literary noun: woe; plural noun: woes great sorrow or distress." i like " fearful woe" . to MyPoemList

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