Monday, March 2, 2009

Dormant Heart Comments

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her heart was a dormant volcano
quiet and still, then our eyes met
and the volcano exploded.
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Sandra Fowler 03 March 2009

Volcano a strong metaphor for passion.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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thank you.. you gave me hope.. i am waiting.. Fantastic poem

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