Monday, September 22, 2014

Dorian Gray Comments

Rating: 3.5

Dorian Gray

With autumn's fall
I too, will fall
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Frank Avon 22 September 2014

The imagery of this poem is simply splendid, and the sounds of the words perfectly echo their sense. Witness these line especially: And the odors Of quince; of rose I paint them all Love-filled and soft I especially like the half-rhymes (odors/rose; all/soft) and the consonance (all/Love-filled) . They literally sing in one's ear. I wish the syntax were just a bit more regular, but all in all, I like this poem. Just what it has to do with Dorian Gray, I'm not sure, but it's been years and years since I read Portrait of Dorian Gray. I remember it only vaguely.

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