Monday, February 21, 2011

Dorian Gray Comments

Rating: 4.5

He had everything immortalized in a portrait;
angelic face, and golden hair, deep eyes
a gorgeous smile, but a heart that cries-
all he could trade for a moment of rapture.
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Agatha Eliza
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Queeny Gona 26 December 2016

Dear Agatha, I am astound at your epertise in writing this philosophical theme. Congratulations for having poem selected as poem poem of the Day in Poem Hunter.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2016

Yet, in life everything comes up with a price; and downfalls succed the glorious rise, of all young men unaware of their demise- At the table of destiny, they roll another dice. A wonderful poem, well penned and nicely presented.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 May 2016

Heartiest Congratulations for versifying the story of Dorian Gray in a superb manner as also on it's selection as the member Poem of the Day.

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Rajnish Manga 27 May 2016

The poem presents a very sound commentary and a philosophy of life. Loved reading it. Thanks. Yet, in life everything comes up with a price; and downfalls succed the glorious rise,

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James Mclain 27 May 2016

To gain experience in love they give their lives to know.. iip

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Paul Amrod 27 May 2016

Hi Agatha A beautiful understanding of the Potrait of Dorian Gray. I wanted to let you know I was as well flabbergasted from this theme. You can visit my poetry and read my Pictures of Dorian Gray I think you would enjoy my approach to the theme as well, Great writing, thanks for sharing, Paul

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Kay Staley 27 May 2016

This could be used as a poetic summary of The Picture of Dorian Gray. A nice tribute to Oscar Wilde himself. A great psychological novel that continues into the ages. While I do not like the way this poem flows, the author did a great job capturing the character of Dorian Gray. An interesting, thought provoking read.

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M Asim Nehal 27 May 2016

Nice poem, I liked it, thanks for sharing...Such a wonderful and inspiring ending Yet, in life everything comes up with a price; and downfalls succeed the glorious rise, of all young men unaware of their demise- At the table of destiny, they roll another dice.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 27 May 2016

When a portrait gets it's place among artifacts, generation after generation will read all stories linked to it. How a poet portraits the whole story in a poem is another story. A valiant effort by Agatha. Congratulations on your achievement. X

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 May 2016

Hi Agatha, Very good poetry. Enjoyed reading. It caught the reflection of a soul/like quivering glimpses of a man unforgiven. Your lines touch the soul of the reader. Unseen hitherto. Congrats. Keep writing and posting. Thank you for sharing such nice piece of work.

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Pamela Sinicrope 27 May 2016

I enjoyed this poem. Well done and nice flow of words and perspective on the story. I especially liked the second to last stanza. Congratulations!

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Clarence Prince 27 May 2016

A nice piece of work, Agatha! Well done! ! !

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Barry Middleton 27 May 2016

Great poetry. But there is a typo. and downfalls succed the glorious rise, should be succeed.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 May 2016

A wonderful write. Since I have read the book, I can judge how beautifully you have captured its essence in this well-crafted piece. Congrats.

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Kelly Kurt 27 May 2016

A timeless human artifact. Congrats on poem of the day

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Wang Qian 27 May 2016

That really calls up my memory when I read the novel for the first time, so touched by the charm of the figure, thanks for sharing!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 27 May 2016

lovely poem...thanks for sharing it. Congrats, Agatha, on being poet of the day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Burning on the ascension pyre! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A good depiction of unchanging nature of change. Thanks for sharing Agatha. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Della Perry 23 September 2015

I like this poem, I am a fan of the story Dorian Gray, super poem.

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