Monday, October 5, 2015

Doppleresque Comments

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Red is the color of things flung apart
The gash;ambulance flashers;red alert;atomic fireball…
The light of understanding as it leaves us.
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Cigeng Zhang 21 April 2016

您用红和蓝喻意生命、物源、自然甚至人性,是一首意义深远的诗。您的中文翻译很美。“万物泼撒而成红”, 第一句就出彩, 很别致。谢谢! You use Red and Blue as metaphors for life, material source, nature and human nature, so it is a profound poem. Your Chinese translation is very beautiful. I especially like the translation of the first line. Unique! Thank you.

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Susan Williams 18 February 2016

Yes! Yes! Yes! I am a huge fan of inner rhymes, of playing with words like they're swirls of paint, of writing glimpses of life, and searching out and examining life through all the senses we have.

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Bharati Nayak 06 November 2015

What a beautiful presentation of colors! How colors represent our different characters, moods, emotions and qualities.Awesome write.Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

White source of enlightenment approaches life. Wonderful sharing really...10

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Denis Mair 05 October 2015

Maybe it is the blueness of Krishna.

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