Doorway Of Time Comments

Life keeps moving with fleeting moments... the fact!

Really a poignant bit of verse portraying the doorway of time with piercing accuracy. Very powerfully and movingly penned with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Thought provoking. Life sometimes seems like a struggle though after reading your words it is a reminder that life is mapped out already. Good luck with your book.

A well deserved Poem of the Day - congratulations.

A very nice poem Congratulations for the poem of the the

And as each one keeps looking out of the window of life each one keeps hoping for their dreams to come true each one peeps at others achievements and imitates each one yearns for others wealth and competes not realizing that what has been decided by fate and fortune A great contribution to Poetry dear poet, beautiful poem, thanks for sharing and congrats for the POTD.

And though upon the will-power of his own mind, man relies to gauge superiority, admiration and praise he either places fire in his eyes and lives unhappy and enraged or chooses the stairway of peace to escalate his harmony and grace - Beautiful poem.10.

each one keeps hoping for their dreams to come true each one peeps at others achievements and imitates each one yearns for others wealth and competes not realizing that what has been decided by fate and fortune........impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

A beautifully crafted poem about life and the role of fate in mab's destiny. 10

a poem about the daily choices we make whether good or bad but they are irrelevant to the passage of time? ................well written BRP

he walks away thro' that doorway of life forever never to return to see where are his treasures and gains never to know what all he achieved for himself was in vain. Great poem, an universal message, a well deserved selection as member's poem.

his origin he cannot forfeit or forget, his destiny he has to accept and adjust..... //..... So, one should accept it and stay put in his place.

A well constructed write.++10

Dear Bernedita, such an inspiring piece👍👍👍

Life's journey! ! Life keeps moving on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Hi Tony, ..............because whatever we achieve is blessed by God and we go on achieving till death........ Those who want wealth, they have to struggle in life and go on achieving it till death but those who inherit wealth are blessed from birth. So fate and fortune decides man's journey of life! Keep smiling and thanks!

And as each one keeps looking out of the window of life each one keeps hoping for their dreams to come true each one peeps at others achievements and imitates each one yearns for others wealth and competes.... do u believe in fate.... i do not believe in fate...... because whatever we achieve is blessed by God and we go on achieving till death........ thank u dear poet. tony

Doorway of time amazes mind. Life keeps on moving with beauty of time and hope through time's gateway. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned...10