Again the door has closed tight
I am left in a sullen dark space
Wound into myself through the night
Feeling alive, but so out of place
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You may think you are a beginner but let me tell you this poem was an awesome write. I felt it; I can definately relate to this experience. Had many lines I liked. But the one I liked the most 'No door is closed forever For they all have a key' These lines were a turing point from a negative to a positive feel.
oh, wow.. thank you so much! That means a lot! Especially since I always wonder whether or not the feelings or subjects I'm trying to write about make sense to other people. I am so happy to hear that you like it, and even more happy to know that you can relate. Thank you for your feed back.