Monday, February 23, 2015

Door Is Open Comments

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Your glimpse put within me; hope
Hope to breath, to wreath, I lope,
Into the dream world; secluded,
Me and you; the curious soul divided,
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Susan Williams 18 November 2020

Your glimpse put within me; hope Hope to breath, to wreath, I lope, Into the dream world; secluded, Me and you; the curious soul divided, - - - playing with words is fun! !

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 23 February 2015

In the wonderful race all have to walk and door of Allah is open for his beloved children to realize life. Very nicely drafted innovative poem really.

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