Doomy Life Comments

Everything my heart truly feels.

Beautiful written i feel it speaks just exactly how i feel

You can tell that this is straight from the heart. A very powerful poem, which conveys a powerful message. Amazing poem.

you write so freely and elegantly, free flowing and true,

very well written, straight from the heart definately a 10

Oh my dear delicate heart.......sobbing and weeping........you are made for that............oh............poor delicate heart.........

good job, beautifully written.

Good write, well expressed, 10 Lynda xx

hmmm...this is indeed a nice poem basically all describing me..... thanks.... +10

GOD knows all the anguish we go through, but the change depends on you. a gr8t write a ten

very nice poem, darkness poem lol

hey this is a great poem! .. feelings nicely penned, thanks for sharing!

Nice poetry about the darker feelings we all possess.

AGAIN, ANOTHER REALLY NICE JOB.

Love it.. really amazing one of the best :)

I was impressed with your emotion and quite liked the way you expressed it but felt impelled to change a few things around for you: see below: Ruthy I have no peace, only wrath; this raw pain devouring my heart. Surely not everyone feels this way. Manacles control and bind me. I am enchained within my sorrows. When darkness comes I try to fight to seek out hope and joyess light The sun sends life from skies above but as the sun sets, die I must my agonies, they stay tormenting to stab my weak flesh with steely knives. My spirit has abandoned me, my soul, it has a broken key. Time alone will heal these wounds and only dogged patience cherish me. God only knows my anguish and I pray, for he alone can save me.

This is very poetic...i love it! With every word you increase the meaning and the feeling of it more and more. Keep writing more!

Loved the expression in your tention tight lines, doom well penned. I enjoyed the read

Loved the expression in your tention tight lines, doom well penned. I enjoyed the read

These verses express your emotions nicely. Sadness and loneliness is a feeling which an individual does feel in their life and only way to overcome these are accepting their presence and by being courageous enough to move in life even when obstacles are present.