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Doomsday Prophet
Autumn,
The harbinger of maladies
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Let me light a candle In the darkening morn And try staying awake, forlorn Over the ages dark and cold And dream of warmer days Bright and fragrant. Ateardrop rolling down my eyes Glimmers! ......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem having thrilling expression with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.10
Sir, Thank you for your comments on this poem. I have seen almost everybody in Delhi keenly looking forward to autumn and winter. They enjoy these cold days. And then follows the lovely spring. Actually onset of autumn marks the end of harsh summer days. But, for me winter is a dread, because of my asthma. Thank you sir, once again.
The title of this poem drew me to go through with this marvelous write. A poignant poem about autumn so beautifully conveyed. Each season has its own beauty and strength. Autumn brings fiery colors when the season starts. Well executed write.10
Hi Rose Marie, Thank you for your appreciation of this poem on the vagaries of seasons. Yes, autumn brings fiery colours in the beginning of the season. But, I am already gripped by the evil portents, because winter is to follow and my wheezing would aggravate..
Let me light a candle In the darkening morn And try staying awake, forlorn Over the ages dark and cold And dream of warmer days Bright and fragrant. Ateardrop rolling down my eyes - - - - - A poignant picture of Autumn- - - Loved its beautiful lines. Glimmers! - - - -
So so beautiful. Autumn brings melancholy to the heart but autumn is also the season that stimulates creativity. You have drawn a soul-stirring picture of the impending autumn. How the dismal atmosphere of autumn affects the soul is so artistically depicted. The last stanza is icing on the cake. The tear that glimmers is suggestive of hope. A sure 10.
Thank you Nosheen, for reading this poem and the wonderful comments. And the invaluable 10...You made my day, dear poet..
Thank you Rini. But, If winter is here, can spring be far behind?
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The visionary impact of flow of your words is something to admire. A descriptive and insightful verse. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Chinedu, Very happy that you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for your words of appreciation.