Friday, September 14, 2018

Donut Comments

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When she said that he was like a donut.
He thought that she felt that he was sweet.
And that he had a nice smell.
But she really meant that he had a hole in the head.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

It is a lovely poem based on dual meaning and fun. All lines are haunting. Beautifully crafted.10

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Rini Shibu 14 September 2018

She really meant that he had a holein the head..funny

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