Wednesday, April 10, 2024

Don't Write A Poem… Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't write a poem
with obscure words
that I have to look up
before I can understand.
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Belle Wassermeister
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Richard Wlodarski 18 April 2024

One of the great things about living in a democracy is that poets have the right to choose what they wish to write about. That luxury is not afforded them under an autocratic government. That aside, I still love your poem!

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Kevin Patrick 18 April 2024

OK I agree and disagree with you on a few things, your right it's great to read nice poetry about nature and ice cream, eat. Now should poems use bi words maybe not, sometimes it's pretentious but it's also nice to learn something. Sad poems....

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Mervyn Graham 12 April 2024

I'll take your advice... lovely poem

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Anjandev Roy 12 April 2024

Absolutely brilliant...... thanks for sharing.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 April 2024

Bravo Belle I just love it TFS

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Rob Lamberton 11 April 2024

I'll "Write a poem about how lovely the mountains are"

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Kim Barney 11 April 2024

Wow! I love this! My sentiments exactly. Five stars for sure!

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Nabakishore Dash 11 April 2024

Nicely chosen lines about what to write in poem.

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Ruth Walters 11 April 2024

I agree. Some people try to be far too clever and it ruins the poems. In any case, it's not necessary and so pretentious.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2024

Ah, but those obscure words, and meanings, make the adventure more fun and exciting! Love your poem, Belle!

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

To my Favorites. ;) I'd give *****, IF I could. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

Yes! You 'got that right! ! '. NO Sad Poems OR Obscure Words should be allowed on PH, period! ! ! Let's vote on it. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

BELLE! ! ! ! Did YOU really write this? ? ? PH should really post a 'WARNING! ! ' on any 'depressing poems' 's pages. REALLY! ! !

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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