Don't write a poem
with obscure words
that I have to look up
before I can understand.
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OK I agree and disagree with you on a few things, your right it's great to read nice poetry about nature and ice cream, eat. Now should poems use bi words maybe not, sometimes it's pretentious but it's also nice to learn something. Sad poems....
I agree. Some people try to be far too clever and it ruins the poems. In any case, it's not necessary and so pretentious.
Ah, but those obscure words, and meanings, make the adventure more fun and exciting! Love your poem, Belle!
Yes! You 'got that right! ! '. NO Sad Poems OR Obscure Words should be allowed on PH, period! ! ! Let's vote on it. : ) bri
BELLE! ! ! ! Did YOU really write this? ? ? PH should really post a 'WARNING! ! ' on any 'depressing poems' 's pages. REALLY! ! !
One of the great things about living in a democracy is that poets have the right to choose what they wish to write about. That luxury is not afforded them under an autocratic government. That aside, I still love your poem!