Saturday, April 28, 2012

Don't Worry Ma......... Comments

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She looks so happy that day
She heard the news after so many delay
She was bit confuse to share her joy
Because, her mind was jumping as a play boy
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Aswathi Asok
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Neetha Sasidharan 03 May 2012

grt poem....nice idea n nice rhymes too...its touchy....kp writing.... r u an indian? ? ?

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Neetha Sasidharan 03 May 2012

really grt...... so touchy too.......nice idea......grt rhymes.....mindblowing......kp writing...

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Adeline Foster 28 April 2012

Interesting thoughts in this poem. Read mine - Mother Dear - Adeline

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