Monday, May 2, 2016

Dont Think About Life, Live It Comments

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Its better to have remorse than regret
And reap the best benifits of a risk, better yet
As years go by and mistakes pile up
I find it oddly easier to lift a smile up
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adam reed
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Pamela Sinicrope 26 August 2016

Nice bit of writing. I wonder if you've taken it literally as I don't see anything posted here since May. Your opening line intrigued me. I've never really thought about the difference between remorse and regret...and now I see that remorse leads to self-improvement, while regret just leads someone to feel bad about their actions, but not really change them. These lines are great fodder for a song and for life. The last line is poetic...my mind scrambling from one metaphor to the next...a literary search for meaning. Well done. Take care.

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