! ...Dont Tell The World! (Sonnet) Comments

form of sonnets. sonnet’s formal requirements (14 lines 10++++++++3

so strong written, so much to learn...interesting the technicalities

It's nice to know another sonnet lover. I write mostly on the Shakespearean format. You did well on your poem.

well crafted poem. acknowledged

a lovely sonnet seema nicely penned -10

And thy memory feeds my mind dying, Daring couple disclose, but don’t you tell, I must say Seema, you are a very skillful writer of poetry... I am impressed and amazed to read this lovely sonnet... You have told us everything, yet saying don't tell the world... Great piece, well done... Surely proud of you... Regards, Kamran

lovely sonnet seema..............excellent............very well penned

no can beat you in using new words and aptly. good. Reveal not, the guarded stash of love, Lest a rational world desires to know! ! ! what do you mean from these two lines: , if the shoud know or not? ths last line seem mis matching.

Read your poem Don't Tell The World, very good theme and well expressed sentiments in sincere form, One critical observation if I may take the liberty of making, [I hope it is alright if not doon't read further[ Sonnet has a form and style 14 lines either three, four line stanza and the last two lines summarizing the prior theme written each line in either ten or eleven syllables, Shakesphere or the alternative form of sonnet where it is divided six line six lines hard it may seem find you will easy for a talented poet like you, please reply ..........

lovely words revealing the well guarded 'stash of love'...forget the rational world for the present...it is not for them anyway! good love poem...10

You have rightly called it a sonnet! It can be put to music and sung! -Raj Nandy

don't you worry...it's beyond the grasp of the rational world any way!

Beautiful piece, its time to tell the world about your great love.Thanks Seema.

a touching sonnet- you are right love is beyond rational mind. Mamta

Really this poem has brought in some yesteryear fragrances of a sonnet. Beautiful; memorable poem indeed.