Saturday, November 18, 2017

Dont Say It. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't say it, I know the story
I can read your face. It has it all
Because each time I lied, my chances faded away
But at least we had a moment before
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Brian Ben
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Pius Didier 23 November 2017

A brilliant thought poem, those memories that haunt me relentlessly... keep writing, for writing is holy.

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Pius Didier 23 November 2017

A wonderful poem altogether. Those memories that haunt me relentlessly... Keep writing, for writing is holy.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 November 2017

sorry I confess, great words

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2017

There is regret and there is love with amazing memories. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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