Don't Read This! ...[ Bri Is Kind; Bri Is Good; I'd Be Even Kinder, If Only I, Bri, Could ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Don't Read This! ...[ Bri Is Kind; Bri Is Good; I'd Be Even Kinder, If Only I, Bri, Could ]

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Please don't read this! You really shouldn't, don't you know?
But IF you DO read this, DON'T say I, Bri, didn't tell you so.
This is bound to upset most of you, old & young, of any sex.
I have one friend who ignored my advice. Boy, it did, her, vex! !

This annoyed her, perplexed her, and caused a lot of trouble! .
She once adored me (as a friend) , but this did 'burst her bubble'.
While once upon a time she thought I was 'God's gift to women',
she NOW knows the truth: ...that all I do is simply Devil-driven! !

I'm 'the worst' kind of 'friend'; all I do is 'take advantage of others'.
She found this ALMOST impossible to believe, but the truth she's now discovered. : (

Perhaps now YOU are curious 'bout what I've warned you NOT to read,
......and I KNOW some people are stubborn; good advice some just
won't heed.
So, as a special New Year's gift to you, this is what I now shall do:
I'll not finish typing this! ! Yes, I CARE that much! Believe me, it IS....TRUE!

(January 20th,2024)

bri edwards

:) :)

Saturday, January 20, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: truth,lies,advice,friends,losing friends
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Forget what I SAID (at the end) . READ THIS! ! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 20 January 2024

So nice of you to not finish this, Bri, and save us the agony.

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Bri Edwards 29 January 2024

My pleasure, Sir Kim. : ) bri

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Rod M.Peters 22 January 2024

Bri's poems are usually pretty straight-forward. I like this more because it's a bit more obscure and leaves you wondering: is Bri God's gift to the literary world or is he actually an agent of Beelzebub? I'd say, perhaps both! But seriously, always a good chucke guaranteed here.

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Bri Edwards 21 January 2024

Good! No one has read OR at least not commented OR PH is slow publishing comment(s) , OR.....I can't stop 'talking'. : ( bri

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 February 2024

Anyway, the poem is interesting and thought provoking. Well expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 February 2024

I have gone through the poem and it is somewhat ambiguous. You said you are simply devil - driven and what you all do is taking advantage of others. You never expressed in the poem the details of such devil acts if there are any.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 February 2024

This cautionary advice could instigate a reader to go through the poem instead of ignoring the same. I am a person that I don't usually heed to warnings specially when it comes to reading.

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Kim Barney 29 January 2024

Just thought I would stop by and NOT read this again!

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2024

Ha ha! ! My GOOD friend on PH, one of millions around the world, asked me to whom I referred in my poem. I assume she meant the vexed female. My answer: not her nor anyone in particular. This one is fiction. bri : )

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