Please don't read this! You really shouldn't, don't you know?
But IF you DO read this, DON'T say I, Bri, didn't tell you so.
This is bound to upset most of you, old & young, of any sex.
I have one friend who ignored my advice. Boy, it did, her, vex! !
This annoyed her, perplexed her, and caused a lot of trouble! .
She once adored me (as a friend) , but this did 'burst her bubble'.
While once upon a time she thought I was 'God's gift to women',
she NOW knows the truth: ...that all I do is simply Devil-driven! !
I'm 'the worst' kind of 'friend'; all I do is 'take advantage of others'.
She found this ALMOST impossible to believe, but the truth she's now discovered. : (
Perhaps now YOU are curious 'bout what I've warned you NOT to read,
......and I KNOW some people are stubborn; good advice some just
won't heed.
So, as a special New Year's gift to you, this is what I now shall do:
I'll not finish typing this! ! Yes, I CARE that much! Believe me, it IS....TRUE!
(January 20th,2024)
bri edwards
:) :)
Bri's poems are usually pretty straight-forward. I like this more because it's a bit more obscure and leaves you wondering: is Bri God's gift to the literary world or is he actually an agent of Beelzebub? I'd say, perhaps both! But seriously, always a good chucke guaranteed here.
Good! No one has read OR at least not commented OR PH is slow publishing comment(s) , OR.....I can't stop 'talking'. : ( bri
Anyway, the poem is interesting and thought provoking. Well expressed.
I have gone through the poem and it is somewhat ambiguous. You said you are simply devil - driven and what you all do is taking advantage of others. You never expressed in the poem the details of such devil acts if there are any.
This cautionary advice could instigate a reader to go through the poem instead of ignoring the same. I am a person that I don't usually heed to warnings specially when it comes to reading.
Ha ha! ! My GOOD friend on PH, one of millions around the world, asked me to whom I referred in my poem. I assume she meant the vexed female. My answer: not her nor anyone in particular. This one is fiction. bri : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So nice of you to not finish this, Bri, and save us the agony.
My pleasure, Sir Kim. : ) bri