Monday, May 12, 2008

Dont Prove Me Wrong Comments

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I am struggling,
Fighting hard with my heart!
It hurts, Pains, it bleeds
I am lost in this world of love, my love
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Srita Sri
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 May 2008

toching love.good poem

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Trinity K 13 May 2008

giving a fight... taking on a fight too... i know as well as you know.... thats the eternal inner turmoil...

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V F 12 May 2008

Another beauty from you.... this one speaks of a lifetime's struggle.. though that lifetime may be as short as a decade..or maybe even a year.. or two.. *** 10***

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Vaibhav Shah 12 May 2008

We want to live in the world of illusion.So we request our (wellwishers) not to break our heart for it will kill our faith and trust.This is a general human nature.You have expressed your emotions and feelings very powerfully.A lovely poem full of innocence.good job.

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