Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Dont Pick On Me Comments

Rating: 2.9

dressed in black from head to toe
should he do this he dont know
he takes a deep breathe remembering what they did
they bullied him since he was a kid
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tanesha davenport
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Nangula Immanuel 07 April 2009

Beautiful stuff tanesha! perhaps you can read one of mine ' a hurting world'

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Tom Golding 11 March 2009

Well written and sadly appears based on reality.

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Rosalita Fernandez 11 March 2009

Cleverly written- seems like its based on fact, brilliant work!

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Ana Guerrero 07 March 2009

I love your poems they have so much strength and reality to them I love this one too.

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