Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Dont Mind To Be Fine Comments

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We fall in different life
We live and choose different path
Still our hearts can be broken
Of many reasons, happy can be taken
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Unwritten Soul
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Rajnish Manga 12 April 2018

The poem brings out a plausible philosophy of life which gets support from psychology and resilience is the force to reckon with. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2018

There is diversity in living and many choose many different paths. But we souls are brothers and we have universal love and affection. We find unity in diversity. Though we cant avoid to run still we trust on God. He heals our minds. This poem has great values and importance. Revisiting this values more...10

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Lyn Paul 12 March 2018

There is happy and sad for us all and we deal with it so differently. Its about not falling which happens to so many. Keeping that mind strong and positive. I know from my own experience. Beautiful words Soul and I love the title, Don't Mind To Be Fine Thank You

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Susan Williams 03 March 2018

Though we cant avoid to run God heals us by flowing time- - ] This couplet really speaks to me. God does heal us- it may seem a long time to us impatient want-it-now people but the healing is coming flowing toward us in God's wise time. Exquisitely said. 10

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Mj Lemon 02 March 2018

Soul, a wonderful insight into our humanity. We injure in completely unique ways, but feel and the share the pain alike....

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Rebecca Navarre 01 March 2018

This Poem, More Beautiful Than Words Could Ever Say! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! You Have Always Had A Way So Deeply Moving! ! ! ! ! In The Poetic Words You Say! ! ! ! ! Thank You Soul, Ever So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Beyond Numbering.........

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Unwritten Soul 02 March 2018

Hi Becca, for always supporting me i should say thank you...and always be thankful. :)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 March 2018

A beautifully crafted write that gives hope. A piece that has been weaved by a kind heart. Very inspiring. Yes, I adhere with all the lines executed in this write, specifically, the 4th stanza.

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Unwritten Soul 02 March 2018

As human we need hope, lot of hopes because we are fragile without it but hopes are real not just illusion my friend :) thank you so much and you too keep writing!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 March 2018

The words you wrote here is sad but with power and is positive. I also sense melancholy here. To be healed is not forbidden, your line: God heals us by flowing time, this poem gives hope and we live on with that. A loveliest poem, profoundly written, Thank you for sharing!

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Unwritten Soul 02 March 2018

Sad and melancholy maybe part of me but well i think its part of life too what we could do is to convert the feeling to get something useful, motivation for us and other.. Thank you so much Sylvia for your kind words and time, i appreciate it :)

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Marieta Maglas 28 February 2018

A wonderful sad poem that is uniquely written.10

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

Thanks dear marieta, i still remember your name because you are one of my early readers since i joined poem hunter. You always welcome back here :)

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Muhammad Ali 28 February 2018

Dear Soul, Hi. what is pain... sometimes a meter of life. and about every relation in life is gifted with pain, directly proposed to the amount of honesty and love in the relation. so, i think, in normal life, it is healthy to have a broken heart or gifted pain. The poem is very clear with positive message and a best title. best wishes friend

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

Hi dear, pain is a test but sometimes can go wrong if we not able to handle it...to have a healthy broken heart is fine but this is the right time also for us to help them to heal so they may also do the same when others hurt. Like a chain reaction of cares and loves. Dear M.A you always give kind and nice way of saying to my work, thanks a lot. You too take care my friend :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

We are human beings. We are souls. Soul drives the body. Through body it gets sadness and happiness. We face unusual situations. God heals us by flowing time. Dear soul, you have astutely and hauntingly inscribed this poem. Appreciated.

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

Thank you dear, through your poems too you keep talking about life beauty and i hope when people read it they may find something to make them smile especially when someone in difficult place to do so. Thanks also for your kind words

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Simone Inez Harriman 27 February 2018

Your lovely poem reminds me of Kahil Gibran's words he says the deeper your sadness carves into your being, the more happiness you are able to contain as joy and sorrow are inseparable. So I understand what you mean by life is still undone when you are sad it's ok to allow yourself to be fine again too. And yes... I totally agree time does heal. I love reading your gentle verse Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 28 February 2018

Thank you so much Simone, yes i was thinking the same as life is a mixture of smile and cry, happy and sorrow...i think sometimes we human to sad and forget to take care our emotion back to its height again..Thank you dear for kind words :)

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