**dont Make My Bed Comments

very different, but really enjoyable. I got the vibe that this was sort of a ode to us men who try to buy our way into graces instead of addressing the real route to a womans heart. I liked it alot, very nice. Check out my stuff if you get a chance.

Sylvi, I love the strength of conviction displayed within this poem. There are some wonderful lines which stand out for me: 'Never adorn my walls with vistas of far away lands I may want to paint a fresco of my ancestors and elfs' Now those are the words of a person, who is not about to be swallowed by another's style, Thanks.

GOOD write the first line a knockout my feelings exactly and your able hands wield the pen with great style 10 Chris xx