Dont Let Me Live Comments

Do your feel the greatness inside of you! I believe every sad experience draw our attension to a great path. Your writing here is very smoth and I felt it in my vein. I think writing is one of your numerous talents. Bravo! ! ! 10/10

amazing write. i really enjoyed. probably one of the best i have ever read on here. once again nice write

Man have I felt all of those feelings at the end of your poem. I still do. I wish I could find a time where the innocence was still left. Great poem though.