Sweet phrases flow from my lips
While my tongue tickles the back of your ear
The eagerness in my finger tips
Hints at the motivation of us being here
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This took my breath away. Its absolutly amazing :) keep writing cause this takes skill and you definitly have it.
Wow what a passionate piece. It flows well and of course the content made the earth move. Great piece 10 from me.
I really have fallen in love with this poem.... what a masterpiece, Tyrone....
WOW! ! lol i absolutley loved it! ..cou; dn't stop giggling! ! ~LoVe MrS. WiNgFiElD
Still such an amazing poem... many many years later.