Sunday, September 21, 2008

Dont Forget To Breathe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet phrases flow from my lips
While my tongue tickles the back of your ear
The eagerness in my finger tips
Hints at the motivation of us being here
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Tyrone Wingfield
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Evaughn 10 August 2019

Still such an amazing poem... many many years later.

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Lacie Wasserman 11 June 2009

This took my breath away. Its absolutly amazing :) keep writing cause this takes skill and you definitly have it.

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Stacey Watts 21 February 2009

Wow what a passionate piece. It flows well and of course the content made the earth move. Great piece 10 from me.

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Monique Jones 26 September 2008

I really have fallen in love with this poem.... what a masterpiece, Tyrone....

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Evaughn Gray 22 September 2008

WOW! ! lol i absolutley loved it! ..cou; dn't stop giggling! ! ~LoVe MrS. WiNgFiElD

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