Monday, December 7, 2020

Dont Follow Me Because I Am Also Lost Comments

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Don't follow me because i am also lost
I am not sure whether we are coming or going
I wanted to raise a family now there's talk of war
Now i don't know anything anymore
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Mihaela Pirjol 07 December 2020

'I wanted to raise a family now there's talk of war.'- the repetition of this verse in each of the three stanzas, makes the poem move in an homogeneous and harmonious manner: I appreciate the technical skill! On the other side, the theme of the poem is the improbability of all things we dream, or aspire, with the only certainty in the rising sun. Wonderfully composed!

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