Dont Follow Me Because I Am Also Lost Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

Dont Follow Me Because I Am Also Lost

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Don't follow me because i am also lost
I am not sure whether we are coming or going
I wanted to raise a family now there's talk of war
Now i don't know anything anymore

I am not sure whether we are coming or going
The only thing sure is the sun will rise
I wanted to raise a family now there's talk of war
Even the reason for the possible carnage is not clear.

The only thing sure is the sun will rise
I wanted to raise a family now there's talk of war.
Even the reason for the possible carnage is not clear.
So, don't follow me because i am also lost

Monday, December 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: doubt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 07 December 2020

'I wanted to raise a family now there's talk of war.'- the repetition of this verse in each of the three stanzas, makes the poem move in an homogeneous and harmonious manner: I appreciate the technical skill! On the other side, the theme of the poem is the improbability of all things we dream, or aspire, with the only certainty in the rising sun. Wonderfully composed!

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