Dont Drink Me! Comments

second read I enjoyed this one very much

This is a lovely poem, I enjoyed the journey you painted.

fabulous and nicely penned.love should be bilateral.the one who slants is a true lover. ~nb

Great poem Love Heart

a good write. enjoyed the read

What a poem, marvelous write Poetheart. Siya_! !

an intriguing poem. i had a bit of trouble. perhaps english is not your 'first' language? ? i'm not sure. maybe it is my 'fault' i don't understand some of this. i don't agree with some of the structure/wording. but i am pretty darn sure there is a mistake in the line: wants nothing to me.......How would it sound to you as nothing OF me? just a typo perhaps. i especially liked: write in the wind from 11 am because the wind that hitting you the night invades and disturbs you and: Only two sips madam! ! as I did not know you I drank three sips...................i like it though i do not understand it. what does the following mean i wonder: before the trees sounding the 12 hours thanks for sharing.

beautiful write.love your write

I love this new write, very nice! ! once i heard something Dont drink me said something from tea cup hahaha joking_Soul

A marvelous presentation Good work