Saturday, January 10, 2009

Dont Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

for every dropp you shed,
i feel as if drops of acid
are gently dropped over my heart.
it burns with pain,
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ajith patnaik
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dr veenaa rai 07 August 2009

being there for ur loved one is love's first lesson...touching, sensitive, ...

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Winnie Angel 11 January 2009

nice and touching in its write!

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There is so much empathy in this poem for another and the words really spoke to my heart too. Well done! Karin Anderson

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 January 2009

don't cry when you don't have a tear to cry.Well writes Ajith.

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Miral El Nahry 10 January 2009

Bravo! ! That was one of the best poems i've read! ! Amazing words put in together. i give you a 10.

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